Any portal which offers Pablo Neruda's poetry to a wider readership is to be commended. However, this is an awkward and ungrammatical translation of the concluding stanza of the sonnet, 'I don't love you as if you were a rose.'
I suggest reading Mark Eisner's translation.
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Any portal which offers Pablo Neruda's poetry to a wider readership is to be commended. However, this is an awkward and ungrammatical translation of the concluding stanza of the sonnet, 'I don't love you as if you were a rose.'
I suggest reading Mark Eisner's translation.